Sunday, March 18, 2012

Emalia

Daughter
I breathed you in
the moment you were released
into the world to make your mark
to question
to love
to empathize
to lead
to be yourself

Daughter
your bright spirit
gives me new life
day in
day out
my purpose redefined
to strengthen your wings
so you can fly
Fly!

Daughter
a reminding smile
of innocence
of peace
of a better place
a heart so pure
so soft
so real
so vibrant

Daughter
the beat of my heart
time quickly passing by
priceless moments
left to reminisce
my memory holds strong
like my arms around you
slow down
I need
to fully embrace you


12 comments:

  1. Lovely poem - it builds and builds until the last stanze when you beg her to just slow down...what a wonderful memory.

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  2. This is a beautiful poem. I really love the way you started each of your stanzas with the word "daughter." It really grounded me in what really matters with this poem.

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    1. Thank you, Stacey. My daughter just turned one today, and as I wrote this, I am still in awe that I am a mother. Wow.

      Mandy Chock @ The Chockboard

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  3. Clear and delicate construction; a very tender piece! Bravo! :)

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    1. Thank you, Paul. The true poet that you are, your comment makes me smile.

      Mandy Chock @ The Chockboard

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  4. That first stanza took my breath away. That is amazing craft, and even more amazing is the sentiment it conveys. Reading your words is such a treat each day!

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  5. Someday your daughter will love to read this and know how special she is to you. Lovely!

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    1. Thank you, Elsie. I will show her this when she is older :)

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  6. I followed your signature link here--it works!
    Nice poem. I can relate. I have 3 daughters and 1 stepdaughter who are now all grown and live far from me. I miss them since I don't see them often, but they were a joy as they were growing up.


    Lee
    An A to Z Co-Host
    Tossing It Out
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    1. Thanks, Arlee! I am honored that you commented on my post. See you at the A to Z challenge in April!

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